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[dial8]

If you guys are interested, lets do some. I'll start.

 

sizzling skillet pops

coffee and bacon mingle

Sun lights morning smiles

[Juthro]

All right I'll give it a go :)

 

 

 

the deep, dark river rolls

the silent fish swims slowly

but can not be caught

[dial8]

Nice! :bow:

 

I'd give it a like but I'm out. Me thinks I need to squirrel some likes away for a rainy day.

Edited by dial8, 08 June 2018 - 12:52 PM.

[Skywatcher]

Falling leaves on water

drift until they sink below.

The deep is quiet.

 

 

Cool amethyst sky.

Evening star burns warm and bright

falling to the sea.

 

 

Bare feet touch the Earth.

Dew filled grass caresses them.

My roots spreading deep.

[Juthro]

@8  Your complementary post was better then a like :)

 

No worries brother.  I run out all the time, lol.

Edited by Juthro, 08 June 2018 - 05:31 PM.

[Alder Logs]

If I had five likes

Instead of maybe seven

Five must then suffice

 

 

So sorry Juthro

While outside moving my logs

I rewrote line three

 

 

Taking back your like

Would be understandable

No fair editing

Edited by Alder Logs, 08 June 2018 - 07:30 PM.

[dial8]

Damn I need a roll around on the floor laughing emote for that one. "Five likes" aahhhhahahha that's witty as shit man.

[dial8]

Noon sun high and bright

Two lizards slither below

A shadow hawk screams

[dial8]

For me a haiku is trying to capture the essence of a single moment (as impossible as that is). That pure thing that is separate from time but where there is still some perception of awareness. It always reminds me of the way I perceived things when I was a small child. The dust in the sunbeam, a speck of something in the dark corner, white mountain peaks barely visible in the distance. That's just me though. Good thing about a haiku is it can be anything. The only rule, that I know of, is the 5, 7, 5.

[Juthro]

Corona with lime

condensation glistening

parched throat salvation

[dial8]

Oh yeah buddy! I can feel my toes in the sand right now! And that quick prick in my throat when liquid meets draught. That ones awesome.

[Alder Logs]

Corona from store

Fluorescent lights in cooler

This beer is skunky!

[Alder Logs]

I remember this:

One time, in a thread long ago --

It was for the birds

Edited by Alder Logs, 09 June 2018 - 03:47 PM.

[dial8]

Haha that's great dude!

[Juthro]

In a thread long ago

 

Birds I can still reminisce 

 

I too remember

Edited by Juthro, 09 June 2018 - 05:02 PM.

[CatsAndBats]

Awesome are many cats

dogs are close to me as well

bats will bat clean up

[Skywatcher]

Concrete Jungle Cracks

Earth Exposed to Air and Sun

The Dandelion Grows

 

 

Suspended in air

Wings in blurred motion spinning

Ruby red throat flashes

 

 

Edited by Skywatcher, 11 June 2018 - 08:05 AM.

[dial8]

Yoga meditate
Back fucking hurts like hades
Pilates sucks ass

That's the way I feel today...lol

[Juthro]

I feel your pain, Dial8.  Or rather I feel my own....

 

Stabbing mussel spasms
Dislocated vertebra
No relief in sight

[Alder Logs]

One sheet of plywood

 

Hoisted into pickup truck

 

Right arm down for count

 

 

 

Could not sleep last night

 

Good Christ this wrist hurts like Hell

 

Must immobilize

Edited by Alder Logs, 12 June 2018 - 09:16 AM.